Thursday, 24 November 2016

Bike description

Bike description
“ Don’t go too far Jackson” said my mum. I kept on biking. I was going really fast, speeding around corners (not knowing that it was unsafe at the time). I felt free before looking behind me. I couldn't see my mum anymore. I got worried. I turned a corner... my bike skidded across the flat stones and I fell onto someone's fence. My mum finally came around the corner after I had called her name several times. She asked if I was ok. I said  that I was fine.

One of the most important days of my life was when I learned how to ride a bike. To many people, a bicycle is the key to their greatest dreams.

3 comments:

  1. Jackson I really like the you discribed falling,when you said my bike skidded across the flat stones really put a picture in my head.

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  2. I can make a connection with you Jackson because I did that when I was learning to ride a bike. I think that you did a really good job at your punchation.

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  3. I can make a connection with you because I did that when a was learning to ride a bike. I think you did a good job of your punctuation.

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